Wednesday, September 5, 2007

we should not have any Zoo in the world

In our world, everyday we have a new problem. In my opinion, one of these problems is Zoos. There are a lot of Zoos. Most big cities have about one or two. This can be a negative effect for the animals. In this essay I shall talk about the several negative effects for Zoos, such as animal rights and also some of the effects in the economic.

Increasing the number of the Zoos can have several effects for the animals. One major point is that, the animal may disappear. For example the number of the polar bear is decreasing now because the Zoos in the north side of the world have a lot of this kind of animal. Also, the animals look much more beautiful in the natural environment such as jungle and the sees. Last year I went to an animal Zoo with my mother then she saw a monkey inside the cage and my mother was very sad then she said , poor monkey. I can remember how the monkey looks like and also I can feel the monkey felling inside this cage.

Moreover, the animal’s rights can affect. In my opinion, it is not fare to put the beautiful animals inside a small cage. This is like the present and who want to be a prisoner?
I can answer this question, of course no one like to be. I can also give a good example for how the animals are are beautiful. In our university there is a nice lake. There are a lot of duck and actually they made the place too nice. I am sure if we saw the duck in the Zoo, they will not be more beautiful like the lake because they have their freedom and also their right.

On the other hand, there are also several effects in the economic with the countries and also the families. It’s very expensive to feed the animals and also to take care of them. Also, the Zoos cover a huge aria and this it very expensive. In my opinion, people should not waste the money in thing because it is not necessary. Also it is not cheap to go to the Zoo.

5 comments:

Katherine said...

Hi Faisal,
I found your comment about polar bears quite interesting. You mention that polar bears are decreasing in numbers... which I believe is true. But are zoos really responsible for this? I thought zoos helped to save the bears from extinction, so that even if there were no bears in the wild at least the species would survive in the zoos.

Davin said...

Morning Faisal, you good? Hey, I got a couple of quiries about stuff in this blog, could you take a minute or two to see if you can clear them up?

Zoos x a couple
economic ? (Adj+noun)
the animal? may disappear
felling
fare
no one like?
a lot of duck?
aria

However some good points, I hope that you incorporate my other comments too aye. See you later D

who is Faisal said...

Dear Katherine .. thanks you for Reading my essay.
in fact, i agree with you because sometimes zoo may help some animals to survive.when i wrote this essay, i just wanted to prove that Zoo is not good.
Actually, Zoo also have severl advantages, such as keeping and take care of a lot of rere animals like polare bear.
thanks again Katherine.

who is Faisal said...

Dear Davin,
Hi davin.. good morning
i am better now than befor, thanks :D

Davin said...

Hope that you are enjoying your holiday, and that you are feeling better now too.